MY GARDEN
In your house, where do you like the most? A wide balcony and you can sit there to have a look at everything around you? A modern living-room with lots of new furnishings? Your room with lovely decoration? Or a warm kitchen? For me, I love my small garden in front of my house best.
My garden is very nice with different species and colors of flowers. In the first warm sunlight of the early morning, drops of dew which are still on leaves and petals look like glittering diamonds. As the sun rise higher, some drops of dew disappear, leaving original colors of flowers: the purple of orchid, the red of cactus flowers, the pink of carnation, and the yellow, white,.. of other flowers. My garden become more and more lively in brilliant sunshine. I like watching small yellow wild flowers on the hence very much. These delicate flowers look so beautiful like small stars, especially when they swing slightly in gentle breeze. Also, sometimes I am attracted with the strong beauty of cactus flowers planted on the pots in the left-hand corner of the garden. Next to them, my father put some pretty carnation pots. And in the middle of garden, you will certainly delighted with the beauty and smell of a big tree which blooms all the time of year.
Moreover, I love my garden because it is really quiet and peaceful. In the right-hand corner, there is a rocking-chair. I can sit there to listen to the bird-songs, enjoy the cool of wind, inhale the sweet fragrance of flowers, the smells of green grass. It is wonderful to watch the butterflies and bees flying as if they're frolicking with flowers cheerfully. Sitting in such fresh air will make me relaxed, have a rest, and take away worries or pressure of life.
I also love my garden because it is the result from caring of all members in my family. Every corner of the garden is fruits of perspiration and labor of my family: from digging, fertilizing,.... to watering every day. Looking at growth process of these flowers, when they were just small first buds until they're grown up, we feel really happy and proud of things we gain.
My garden isn't very big or beautiful as gardens in parks or in some tourist attractions; it doesn't have valuable flowers but I love it because of it own beauty. It is always a special place and the most attractive garden in my mind.
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