30 thg 10, 2009

My garden

MY GARDEN
* Outline:
1. Thesis statement: For me, I love my small garden in front of my house.
2. Body paragraph:
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Paragraph 1: I love my garden because it is very nice with different species and colors of flowers.

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In first warm sunshine of the early morning, drops of dew are still on leaves and flowers look like glittering diamonds.
+ As the sun rise, drops of dew disappear, leaving the original colors of flowers: the purple of orchid, the pink of carnation, the red of cactus flower,the yellow, and white of some wild flowers,..,making them more and more lovely in brilliant sunlight.
+ I really like some delicate flowers such as small yellow wild flowers on the hence.
+ Sometimes, I am also attracted with the strong beauty of cactus flowers, planted on the pots in the small left corner of the garden.
+ In the middle of the garden, there is a big tall tree, blossoms all the time of year.
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graph 2: I love peace and quietness of the garden.
+ A rocking-chair in the right corner of the garden.
+ I can sit there, listen to bird-songs, enjoy the cool of breeze wind, inhale the sweet fragrance of flowers, the smells of green grass.
+ Sitting in such fresh air can make me relax, have a rest, and take away worries or pressure of life.
* Paragraph 3: I also love my garden because it is resulted from taking care of all members in my family.
+ Every corner of the garden is fruits of perspiration and labor of my family, from digging, fertilizing, to watering every day,...
+ Looking at growth process of these flowers, when they just are small first buds until they are grown up, we feel really happy and proud of things we gain.
3. Conclusion:
My garden is not very big, it isn't as beautiful as gardens in parks or in some other tourist attractions, but I love it because of its own beauty. Actually, it is always a special place in my mind.

1 nhận xét:

  1. your writing is very good. it seems that you write with your heart and really confident.
    each paragraph is a specific picture, has its own ideas.
    vocabulary, grammar : good A

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